Kejtie
18 Apr 2024 00:00
Kejtie's review of Powerless
Firstly, Lauren, girl, get a better editor.
Honestly, this book was kind of a mess. Between writing in simple English to poetic descriptions of love, lust, and death, I got lost a lot. Also, this book was a poorly written mix of The Hunger Games, Throne of Glass, Harry Potter, and to be honest, even a little The Vampire Diaries.
The writing style still has me confused about the time period. Was this happening in a medieval or modern time period? Also, the characters were so damn juvenile. At times, I forgot they were all around late teens to early twenties.
This book was too long. 250 pages too long.
There was so much going on, and at the same time nothing was going on. She was jumping from scene to scene, the characters were bland, the story was predictable — honestly, I was struggling the last few pages.
Honestly, this book was kind of a mess. Between writing in simple English to poetic descriptions of love, lust, and death, I got lost a lot. Also, this book was a poorly written mix of The Hunger Games, Throne of Glass, Harry Potter, and to be honest, even a little The Vampire Diaries.
The writing style still has me confused about the time period. Was this happening in a medieval or modern time period? Also, the characters were so damn juvenile. At times, I forgot they were all around late teens to early twenties.
This book was too long. 250 pages too long.
There was so much going on, and at the same time nothing was going on. She was jumping from scene to scene, the characters were bland, the story was predictable — honestly, I was struggling the last few pages.
